Pass away!?

by brkendown   May 11, 2006


I wash away sitting here wondering
what is it that i am going for
do i have a reason to live?
what is my goal?
can i find one?
its been so long
ive though soo hard and yet i still dont no what the answer is!
do i have anything to do or say?
and who should i say it to?
but most importanly can i find a way to help myself..
before i pasa away?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stacey

    Ok, like the other one, spelling and grammar really take away form the meaning of this poem. I found myself concentraring on that rather than the writing. but the writing was well done :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Many people feel the same way you do, but be strong and keep up the good work...

    -Josiah

    Thanks for you c/r

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    It's pretty rash....but it's interesting. Yes the spelling needs looking at....but if you reworked this one using the framework you have now this has the potential to be even better. Nice stuff..

    [lost_laureate]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    You have som espelling you might want to go over and the exclaimation point screams the final word instead of making it feel more like a question. The style is alright. You could have gone into detail but this is alright.

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