Did I do something wrong?

by blade_rush (Justin)   May 12, 2006


Why do you not love me?
Did I do something wrong?
I did everything you told me to
Why can't you see the love that I see?

I miss you so much
your sparkling eyes made my day
no matter what I did or say
Its not only your kiss but your touch

that sweet tender feeling of your soft skin on mine
Makes my whole world feel brighter every time
but now your leaving me in flash
The more I try to catch up, the faster you dash

Out from my arms and into the free
Where I can't go, not you nor me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was good. Not mind blowing or anything like that. Also in the third stanza you forgot a word in front of flash, in case you care. It'll have a better flow for that line then. But overall this was something that kept interest and didn't get all wordy. The last stanza was really cool.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Ahhhhhhhh thta is so cute i really like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica Sharon LaPointe

    I Like this . its so good.. Don't worry. Love will find you. I lost the one I love to. and I still love him after a year and a few months. Good luck

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