You were Strong, He Was Stronger (abuse)

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   May 12, 2006


Your death was slow and painful
he always kept you down
and although you tried to fight him
your body let you down

you drowned in all his feelings
you drowned in all your tears
you drowned in all his hurtful lies
and your biggest fears

he was supposedly your biggest dream and that may well be true
but you never looked me in the eyes
and you were always black and blue

So one morning when when i came to visit you
i was not really surprised
to find you dieing on the ground
with bloodshot, pain filled eyes

i rang 000 as fast as i could
but you could not be saved
you had slowly slipped away
to many hardships you had braved

whilst we were planning you funeral
who should turn up in our life
but the f**cking B**sted that killed
whom was so heartless with that knife

at your funeral i told him that i knew
that the was the one that killed you
and when i did he just shrugged, so
your the only one who will ever know

so when he did i got my gun
and the b**rsted got all smart
and he whispered, that b**tch deserved it
so i shot him through the heart

*hey it doesn\'t matter if you don\'t vote, but i would really appreciate it if you would all comment, i promise to do the same, thanks Mel*

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    'oly fcuking shti!!!
    this is an awsom poem.........
    5/5 for sure!!!!!
    i love the ending and the beginning...
    especially the part of "she deserved it" right at the end cos my dad has said tht to me.. nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is another nice poem! i am thinking it was true, cos the feelings of turture was strong in here! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Omg i love that
    im in a bad relationship and i can see my friends writting something like this
    now things are going to change
    thanku so much
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by patric ortiz

    WOW DID THIS REALLY HAPPEN? IM GUESSING PART OF IT DID

  • 18 years ago

    by patric ortiz

    WOW DID THIS REALLY HAPPEN? IM GUESSING PART OF IT DID

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