by Ashley May 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Sweet little tear falling from my eye, |
by CalVein
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Hey Wow...this is nice...i like how u piece it all together...the last line of every stanzas are the thoughts u want to express....very well done...i like the format...its ok..Good job |
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Great peice! pretty original good idea whch you have implimented very efectivly to create a fantastic expressive peice of writting. |