My new poem, to all of you.

Nice poem, i truly loved and it is so true poem as i know your story, hell yea she doesnt deserve it, ur pen is right. i'm proud of u that u admit it she doesn't deserve it, keep it up.5/5

Dang, i especially love the last two lines

its amazing

I know exactly how you feel, im going through that same ish right now

Simply but beautiful poem, ohh..lovely penned, keep writing, have a good day, and thansk for your nice comment, much appreciated! take care.

Emshab chera zang nazade?

Been there before Gorgan! hey, I checked out you're book on amazon! I want to buy it, it might bring out something touching to me. Keep the unique poems going! you're doing better then I am! you inspire me sooooooo MUCH! I fall in love with you're poems. You're mind has a mind of it's own. Some of you're poems make me cry. Exellent poems you deserve a career in poetry.

Thank You all for the nice comments, I will try to post more poems as now i know there is someone who love to read my poems.
thank you all

Deep is the word again dude....

Thanks for the comment on mine, as I see you write about a broken heart too.

I really liked this one, it was short but it said much more. Beautifully written and great work. 5/5

Chelsey

Its good flow tell she changes every season and thats how i am! with my bf! i go to write something nice like he ased and i can get pas the i love you or what not good write! keep it up theanks for the r.r.c!
brkendown!

I like your anology, But the hardest part is realizing when someone isnt good enough for you, knowing what they are and finally seeing them. Then realizing through all that you still love them, no mater what, you cant stop. I like it, I injoy your style its Just right. SOooo... lol keep it up From other coments you have alot of people wanting to hear more anyways lol.

Hey, excellent work here. The poem is so powerful and real. I really enjoy reading your poetry. This one is a 5/5.

Like the colors of the leaves
[I don't know if this is only for australia, but isn't 'colors' spelt 'colours'?]
I thought it was an alright poem. You could add some more to it though.

`Taleee. xx.

Awww...well i liked it! It was good

I really love this poem, its something i can relate to so much but with boys haha ;p youve done an excellent capturing the emotions of love... well done
love maddy xoxox

Beautifully exectuted. Nice turning point at well.
5/5
As always~ Kate

I like the last 2 lines. good metaphor.

Lol This poem reminds me of.. COLORS OF THE WINd.. in that one disney movie.. lol great poem

Wow that was awsum. a beautiful portrayal of pain. 5/5