Saying Sorry

by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ   May 13, 2006


Saying sorry can sometimes be tough
People don\'t say sorry quite enough
Its always hard to admit you were wrong
But it has to happen for people to get along

Everyone has and will make mistakes
Its part of a relationship to give and take
If you love the person that you did wrong
Say your sorry and help yourself belong

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  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Nice job ~ I like the topic!

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Good poem, short but gets to the point! And I agree, people dont say sorry enough! Good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Driver

    I love how this poem is true and down to earth, one of a kind. im goin through a situation like this right now, great write. 5/5
    Driver

  • 17 years ago

    by Vegetable

    I like the idea, I really do. However, I think it could use some work. It seems in several places you sacrificed meaning for rhyme, like in the last line. Also the whole poem sounds choppy. Maybe make it a little longer, and incorporate more poetic and figurative language. Nice try, with some fine tuning it could be a great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    IT seemed unfinished.
    Thats just my point of view i guess.
    4/5
    but still many people seemed to love it.
    keep goin'
    ~Emma

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