Wired Skin of Drinking Straws

by Sondos   May 14, 2006


Asbestos eyes and death breathe mist
The midgets gazed and hissers hissed
With craned up necks and speckled flecks
Of the frayed edged parchment of the hex

Her nose was upturned slightly with an air
Of snobbery, carried with out a care
For she was dainty as a whor
With wired skin of drinking straws

She once carried dresses of stiff polka dots
And travelled to Paris with her book of snapshots
Her hair would rustle and her washing line dance
With odd socks and vests and striped underpants

But once a man, with a pasted moustache
Kissed her and caressed her preened eyelash
And it was like she was cartwheeling around and around
As if she was squealing without making a sound

Her lily was strangled, her youth taken too fast
She tried to ignore the hex of her past
But the rain came and the concrete heaved
Past stained tissues and snot filled sleeves

The polka dots faded and the panty hose ripped
She soon became a failure-burnt out and wrinkle lipped
Her eyes turned from honey rivers to glass
This the façade she carries, her Viennese mask

Asbestos eyes and death breathe mist
The midgets still gaze and hisser still hiss
With craned up necks and fleckled specks
Of the frayed edged parchment of the hex

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  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wow, breathless poem. Wonderful first stanza.

  • 17 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    O.O
    Good
    Job
    O.O

    ...mia...

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Sondos!! what can i say that i have not saud before. Bob Shank and Kaylee are right. You are one of the best on this site.

    this one is truly terrific. Your play of words, the rhyme... everything seems perfect.

    well done. there is so much inspiration one can draw from you!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that poem was really good.. The description of this was really well and The flow and rhythm of this was perfect. You have an amazing way with words, you are very talented! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    Thank you for all of your comments. For Cory Mastrandrea, thank you for your suggestion, I have added in an extra stanza near the end. Hope its okay

    Thanks

    Sondos