I want to tell you something...

by krzysiek   May 15, 2006


I want to tell you something...

Love is such a perfect word
only people are so wrong
very hard to understand
everyday they make mistake

You are someone special to me
only with you I can exist
unbelievable how much I\\\'m addicted to you...

*** some message is hidden in it... i think that it isn\\\'t too good but why not to put i here if i already wrote it. ***

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  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    It's a little to short and there really is no pattern except the beginning letters spell 'I Love You' Nice start but try to make it longer somehow

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I would get rid of the site error. Just edit the poem and take it out and it'll be fine. Maybe expand on it with details to bring it to life But I can't find the hidden messages lol I guess that's why they're called hidden. Overall short and sweet though

  • 17 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Hey nice start i have to say..if if was a little longer it would of been better...but over all i liked it.....4/5...keep working on it!

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