Other Half

by *Melanie*   May 19, 2006


You have no idea how much you affect me
you\'re the only thing i think of
when i\'m in your arms, i\'m safe
you are my baby, my angel sent from above

no one touches me like you do
my heart, body, and soul
i\'m the luckiest girl in the world
you\'re my other half, with you i\'m whole

**very short...just some things that i wrote down when i should have been paying attention in class hehe**

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  • 16 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    No Harm Done!...I Found That Some Of My Best Poems Were Written In Class When I Was Suppose To Be Paying Attention

    In This Poem My Favorite Part Would Have To Be How You Wrapped It Up In The End...As a Poet I Feel The Most Important Part Of a Poem Is The Beginning And The End (With a Smooth Middle Of Course) "you're my other half, with you I'm whole" That Line Was a Stroke Of Genius...5/5

    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Yes....very short but with lots of meaning. Very well done!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    I like the simple things and you've said your words very well. I like it.

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