Tornado of emotions

by roisin   May 20, 2006


Loneliness fill me inside
an endless aching for love
a need for someone who understands
i feel so alone with no one to talk to

the only truth i know is that everything is a lie
i can only keep believeing in my dreams
maybe if i keep wishing, they will come true
but even that i find hard
they slip away from me like water falling through fingers

tears run down my face
where they have so many times before
each one carries so much pain
so many memories

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  • 17 years ago

    by Karen Urate

    I love the title! hehe! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. that is so sadd.. that really was full of emotion! this had a good flow and was very descriptive! the only problems or suggestions i have are::

    Loneliness fill me inside
    ^ in this line, it should be "fills" not "fill"

    and

    they slip away from me like water falling through fingers
    ^ here, i think it would sound better if you added a "my" before "fingers" but thats just a suggestion :)

    great write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this is really an amazing poem, so much of bitter realities into it potrayed in a beautiful manner, graet write
    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very well written. amazing. congrats

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