Wow...

Its so dark... oooo *goosebumps* I like it ...

Problems:
in darkness and sadness, down she layes.
layes should be lays
and
"Don't worry little darling, they won't hurt you anymore"
should be a period.

Other than that I LOVE IT!

Usually I pick my favorite line/stanza but I loved every. single. line.

Excellent Job
5/5

Aw. very emotional&sad. i adored it.

Wow... such an amazing poem, draws you in... great end to.

well done keep writing love your work!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

I didn't like it, image is poor. I'm not going to rate this one, maybe it is touching but i think that is your worse poem.

Wow. i see you like dark poems, but i still loved it. it was nicely written, i couldn't find anything wrong with it. everything about it was just perfection.
Born by a freak, raised as a slave,
No one to guide her, to tell her how to behave.
my fave lines^^ 5/5

This is beautiful. I'm amazed by the rhyming. It's absolutely perfect! A really sad topic. Thanks for sharing this. 10/5 =]

0.0 MAN!! Where do you get the ideas for those poems from? you're very imaginative..It's beautiful..Write on :]