When a stranger comes

by Brittney   May 22, 2006


The little children were tucked into bed.
The house maid was dead.
he had already struck.
i called the cops they tracked down the call.
they called me back to tell me get out of there.
i went to check the children they were gone.
the had went to hide.
i found them and then he came. we locked ourselves into the bathroom.
but he was in the bathroom closet.
out we ran.
he pulled out his gun and he fired.
the next day i was in the hospital.
it was vacant.
i wondered the halls and and then the phone rang.
i went to answer it.
there he was behind Thad door.
he grabbed my throat and pulled away.
he got some skin and i went down to the ground.
there i lay dead with no help but only this stranger.
that has killed me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Omg that is so totally like the film
    a stranger calls
    you seen it?
    anyways tis verh good =]
    keep up the good work
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by tom

    Bluddy hell!!!! this is amazing! really is, u write way better than your age! spooky thought that poem, i will lock my door 2night! lol,
    keep it up
    love and peace tom xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmy

    Kool poem britt! it sounds like a book i read once... :) but there were some typos.

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