Hold me tight ((Tritina))

by Brigitte   May 23, 2006


Craving your compassionately embracive hold
Desires flowing deep inside of me
Yearning your arrival as time runs tight

Lips clutching too secretive wishes firmly and tight
Coveting memories with the power to withhold
Repeating your sweet melody to no one but me

Yet still you find no need to fret over me
No apparent reasons to snuggle me tight
Please don’t let me slip from your strong, loving hold

Hold me tight!

This would be my first \"Tritina\" Poem! To write one you first think of a three line stanza. and then you work them into this pattern

A
B
C

C
A
B

B
C
A

A,B,C

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "Craving your compassionately embrasive hold"
    'embracive', not 'embrasive'
    ~~~
    "Yearning you arrival as time runs tight"
    'your' not 'you'
    ~~~
    "Lip’s clutching too secretive wishes firmly and tight"
    no apostrophe needed in 'lips'
    ~~~
    "Please don’t let me slip from you strong loving hold"
    'your' not 'you', and I'd put a comma after 'strong'.
    ~~~
    "To write one you first think of a three word sentance."
    I think you mean:
    "To write one you first think of a three line stanza"
    ~~~
    I thought the form was a very interesting one; one I had never encountered before, and it made reading the poem very interesting.

  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    Wow! great job i really enjoyed the read! i liked it a lot!

    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by nekell

    Kool poem!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww! that was soo sweet! i l.o.v.e.d it! so much! i love your writing! it is so original and emotional and just so.. beautifuL! every poem of yours that i read makes me either smile or cry! you're an amazing poet and you should neverr stop writing! 10/5

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    Wow really good, excellent
    nicely spoken
    and i can really relate

    well done!

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