I Wish You Could See

by tiffany   May 23, 2006


Im sorry for all the hurt and pain that in the past you have faced
But most of all Im sorry that none of it can be erased!
Im sorry that you feel like nobody seems to care
But for you I will always be there.
I wish that I can make you see
How special you are, not only to me.
You are such a sweet guy
And I cant figure out why
You cant see this for yourself
It breaks my heart you had to go through all this by yourself!
I wish that for one day you could see through my eyes
See how when I look at you Im mesmerized.
See how your smile lights up the entire room
See how your laugh breaks through to my gloom.
See how your presence is always at ease
See how patient you are and so ready to please.
See what I see, when we look eye to eye
I just wish you could see you are NOT a bad guy!
Your special and I mean that in a good way
And I know at times I cant find the right words to say
To tell you this,
But just being around you is pure sweet bliss!
You showed me a side of you that I never knew exists,
Just an added bonus that makes it hard for me to resist!
I hope all these compliments wont go to your head
But I hope that you know I meant every word I said.
You are funny, sweet and kind
And Im so happy that you are a friend of mine.
So read this every once and awhile
When you are feeling low
And maybe you might just start to smile
And let your anger go

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Oh yay this is so great
    very emotional and full of love and desire!!!
    sweet poem honey, I envy this guy =P
    I loved yout title so much, very great and captivating!
    Keep it up
    I'm so sorry I kno my reply is tooo late, I never noticed that I hvn't commented ur poem!
    Luv Ya
    NemO XxXxXxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Anne Conner

    Oh my gosh. lol I have the same problem with umm I guess I could call him 'my' guy... long story. lol Anyway great poem. If you work on your structure you could be an even better writter than you already are. =)
    ~anne~

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    This is so good, i really enjoyed reading it.
    it's quite amazing
    well done!

    xXxXsmileXxXx

  • Omg this is so sweet great job...and keep up the writting. i tell my bf the same things u tell ur boy in this poem....very sweet