Shouting Hate

by Momentary Relapse   May 23, 2006


Call me everything you can
Spit out the words you love to hate
Oh, c'mon baby go ahead and hate me
Scream out all your words
I know you wanna beat me
Go ahead here's my heart
Oh, c'mon let it all out
Show me what destroys your mind
Scream and curse
Rip me to pieces and break me down
C'mon! C'mon show me your hate

*Not great-a five-ten minute thing

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  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww its really good actually for being that short x x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    I can relate all too well. and this is pretty good for a 10 minute writing time..you can really feel your emotions...
    Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I like this.. sounds like something I would say to my ex.. so I can definitely relate to this. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Its still good, but you were right with your note. for a five-ten minute thing its not bad though...it shows a couple odd images in your head though...not that bad

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