Fluttering Hearts And Shaking Hands

by Megann Lee   May 25, 2006


It's almost to much to bear.
This haunting feeling that lingers deep with-in.
These thoughts reside, so deep inside.

Of Longing hours, with no hope,
Fluttering Hearts and Shaking Hands.
Sweaty Palms And Slurring Words.

These reacquiring, memories fade.
In and Out with each day that follows.
Of the never ending love that comes.

Starlit skies and a moon so bright.
Of how we wish, we could be hand in hand.
Lips to Lips and Arm in Arm.

Growing fears that are soon brought to the surface.
Repeating questions, that remain unanswered.
Silence stinging, with words unspoken.

Of the love we feel for each other.
Growing feels, almost to strong too shake.
Of the nothingness we once shared.

That is the love that we share.
For we too have resuming thoughts of..
Fluttering Hearts, And Shaking Hands.

©Megan - 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by MudkipzPlx

    I love it. So yet again Lovely Poem Megan.

    Love MKKA!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. very very good! excellent poem! amazing imagery, brilliant descriptions, impecable flow, and so much emotion! what more can someone ask for? wonderful job! 10/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww that is really sweet. I loved the way that you described everything. You had some great word usage. My favorite stanza was:
    Growing fears that are soon brought to the surface.
    Repeating questions, that remain unanswered.
    Silence stinging, with words unspoken.
    That line really stood out to me. You did a great job on this! I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Derf K

    'Fluttering Hearts And Shaking Hands'
    by Akina Hearts Jarrad

    "It's almost to[o] much to b[e]ar[X].
    This haunting feeling that lingers deep with-in." >>> Within is the way to go unless you had a specific use of the hyphen to indicate something in the poem. :_) > lip to lip would sound more poetic and is consistent with 'arm in arm'......

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done. One comment... "almost to strong" should be "almost too strong". Otherwise, good write. 5/5

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