The_Hated

by Aussie   May 27, 2006


Surrounded by the hated
they criticize
my every move

they say
my best ain't enough
to satisfied the hated

they prefer my every word
to be wrong
they're even embarrassed
by my silence
as well

the only right
is the hated
there's no one else

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  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    I love this one, because I can relate to it. I love the poems that don't have a lot of words, but mean so much. Great job. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Mason

    Ooooh nice...but try not to use improper words such as "ain't". it makes the poem sound unintelligent. other then that, excellent work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jin

    I know how that feels. But, I always say what goes around comes around twice as hard. It has always been proven to be true. Keep your head up! 5/5! Nice Job!=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jax

    This poem is awesome. I love it. Thank you for reading my poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I totally love this...cause sometimes it seems like everyone only wants you to be wrong and mess up...great job!