What do you do

by stephanie16   May 30, 2006


What do you do when you don't think you have a chance
what do you do when you feel like your whole life is a trance
what do you do when you have no idea
When your dying inside and you cant figure out why
what do you do when your whole life is a mess
what do you do when your life is at its final test
what do you do when you start to believe
that your whole life is one big scheme
what do you do when your moms abusive
what do you do when you don't know where to go
what do you do when everyone in your life makes you feel low
what do you do when you don't think you can go on
what do you do when everything goes wrong
what do you do wen you realize its time to say goodbye
what do you do when you decide to take your own life

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  • 17 years ago

    by gemowski

    This poem is so deep. i really enyojed readin it its filled with emotion.
    great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "what do you do when you have no idea
    When your dying inside and you cant figure out why"
    idea and why don't rhyme, idea ends in an 'uhhh' sound and why ends in an 'iiiii' sound.
    ~~~
    "what do you do when you start to believe
    that your whole life is one big scheme
    what do you do when your moms abusive"
    iono what scheme was supposed to rhyme with
    ~~~
    "what do you do wen you realize its time to say goodbye
    what do you do when you decide to take your own life "
    also not a rhymed couplet
    ~~~
    I wouldn't mind if none of the lines rhymed at all, but if you want to make a poem composed of rhymed couplets, then I think you should try to carry the format all the way through.

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