You're self worth and self esteem?
Non-existant if thats all you see
Mountains of repulsive flesh
Don't blame them for thinking less

goreous poem, kid, loved it a lot. like to read your words because they stick ever so nicely unto my thoughts and they seem to written with my heart at mind.
-cheers,
Lindsey.

This poem is really really good and i enjoyed reading it, as with all ur poems!
"Karma is a backstabbing friend" that antithesis is really effective, and its my favourite line in the poem because of its thoughtful concept.
the whole peice is really clever, and conveys the overall idea perfectly. love it! xx

" Life has spited, Life has cried
Left you with a wandering eye
Commitment isn't the smallest thing
Gives concrete boots and clips your wings"

Amazing, just like the rest of your poems that I missed reading. However that stanza has to be one of my favorites that you've written. Never give up writing.

*> PainOfOne : blaine

Excellent poem hun! It feels so refreshing to come back and read your poems I adore so much, as usual, keep up the great work! 5/5

Wow avellana. This is one of my favorites of yours. perfectly written. Sad, but completely understandable. I can relate. I love it and you and hope it gets better!