Past and Future

by Becky   May 31, 2006


Suddenly all became clear,
I don't care
your pain is not worth mine
I shall not suffer
simply because you wish me too

I will no longer allow
my past to haunt me
for it's my past
and not much to remember
but I have my future
to greatly anticipate

past pains don't hurt
they are the past
this is the now
and I'm happy
just the way it is

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I think this poem would improve a bit if you didn't use the word 'past' so much, it just seemed to clog the poem up with its nonstructured repitition. Besides that, good poem. I liked the first stanza the most because it seemed the most specific, and it gave the poem originality and character.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Short poem, But, I liked it! Yup I did!
    Theres only 3 stanza, So it's hard to pick a favourite. But it was an overall great job. Had a good message behind it, And I could relate a little. Keep up the good work! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

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