Powerful write, the way you stop and leave the ending sort of open adds to this power as the reader knows what is to come but is not told dirrectly.

if this is true in any way i am servially sorry

OMG im so sorry if this poem is true!! i seriously hope this NEVER happened to you!! good poem

and if you also have a new poem or one you think i should read let me know cause id love to read and comment on it!! great job

do you mind if i add you to my favorites so i can remember and check out ur poetry later!!

-almostloved

Wow. This was sad. Really good though. Has great imagry. I think you should try and do a 2nd part. Cause at the end you said 'My worst nightmare began' You could write another one explaining it more. But awesome poem. I really enjoyed reading it! 5/5

`Taleee xx

I dont think that should ever happen to anybuddy thats sad well great job keep writing.

Jay Jay

P.s sure ill add u to my fav

A very powerful poem indeed, I agree with master of shadow as he said leaving the ending short lends to the power of this. Great job, and thank you for your lovely comments on mine. I will continue to read your work. Timothy r

Aww, sweetie that was an extremely well written and powerful poem. I could feel your pain if such an incident was true. I've been through the same. Keep it up and stay strong. 5/5

I like this poem of urs its good and i understand it i almost was in that position but i was lucky to get out!! i have read ur other poems u r good at it keep it up

heather

Short. But Amazingly Powerful Wonderfully Written And Great Message.. I Hope You(if This Happened To You) Filed Charges And He's Put Away..
Losers.....

xoxo

xLauren3

Omg...that's terrible(not the poem...what happened)...you described it so well though...i could see it in my mind. 5/5. stay strong.

Wow.... that poem was really good... brought back memorys though... you are very talented.

Wow.. that's like the main word I can say right now. I think this is a really sad poem but very well written. ~__^ And if this is true about you or a friend then I'm also sorry that it happened. u__u. 5/5 for dope lol.

I like the way you just let the reader guess at what was going to happen next. It is assumable, but you don't say it out right.:) Great job!

Ahhh sweetie , i felt the hirt and the pain,That should never have to happen. This flows nicely. Keep up the good work

That freaked me out a little bit but i like it mayb u could expand on it>?
frm kida xoxo