BANG!

by xxxxxxxxmary   Jun 3, 2006


Rain comes hard down on rooftops
She looked out her window
with a sense of lost hope.
she fears her husbands death
which gives her the reason to stop living
she walks to his office in dispear
to find a locked box.
She opens it
with the key to his heart
her fingertips throbe
as she pulls out a gun.
With him in the hospital ready to die,
She is the one dying inside.
She wonders why god lie
god sent her true love,
but now he must die.
Good took away her love
and as she gripped the gun
with a simple kiss
and a sweet voice that whispered
"I love you"
She pointed it to her head
the gun went off
and soo did her heart
she laid there motionless
in the puddle of broken hearted blood

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  • 17 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Sad but good poem.
    I think in lines 14 15 God should be capitalized.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. that is very sad! You did a great job on this! It almost brought a tear to my eye. But I loved it. You're very talented. Keep it up! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Annabelle

    Its so sad nice writting i wish i could write like you :)

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