On the Surface

by PatheticLittleGirlxx   Jun 4, 2006


On the surface,
She seems fine,
But dig in deep,
And see shes dying,

Look into her eyes,
And see the pain,
The tears of hurt,
The tears of shame,
The tears of anger,
The tears for him,

Look past the smiles,
See through the laughs,
Search deep in her heart,
And see it break apart,

Watch as she begins to fall,
Her walls crash down,
And let out,
All her emotions,
All her pain,
All that shes been hiding,
From all her friends.

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  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem very well writen many people have gone through this. keep it up 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Great poem! and i love it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Great poem. Alot of emotion in it. It could have been a little longer, But it's great the way it is. I loved the 2nd stanza. Keep it up! Take care and god bless. 5/5

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