The Bedrooms Nightmare

by -Ghostship Fidelity-   Jun 6, 2006


The leaves in the dead trees lurch
Interweaved within the breeze that drives hard to collapse
The moon glistens with an intoxicated stare
Cease the clip right there
Admit the beautiful girl
That punctually commandeers the screen
With teeth akin to knives
Lips comparable to deaths own icy contiguity
I pose here oblivious to what she is about to do
As she laces her fingers round my spine
With an unvital snap, I have been abdicated
Impelled into the abysmal barathrum beneath your bed
Full of all the people you hungered
And got over just as expeditiously
Glass lacerates into your neck
As you aspire to drain your poisons to hastily
Swallowing the cup in the rigorous endeavors
This wooden frame about your window leaps
It's fashioned for your image
Both of you bracing to expire tonight
The ceiling fan howls as it craves to hang from it's cord
It was fabricated to tenure you by the throat
Dangling two feet aloft those virgin white sheets
They are as white as the apparitions in my vitiated brain
I put a unhallowed smile on as I withdraw this blade
And inject its apex into your skull

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  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    An amazing read... The dark description and powerful images that you potray is so captivating... Great flow of words and amazing choice of words...

    Definitely 5/5 from me...

  • 17 years ago

    by Allen

    Phew, that poem was a good read, tho I aint too into darkness, it was a good poem. The words you managed you put in there. You have greate talent. Well done. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    I love the words in this poem. all descriptive and i could never think of writing them. unique and amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow...................... your vocabulary, the imagery, wow.... you're seriously talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    Bloody Brilliant!! Your choice of words were amazing, and the darkness in it was quite a treat for me, an excellent vacation from the simplex writing i've been reading all day, absolutly wonderfull, i'd give it higher than just a 5 if i could - but a 5 shall have to work