It was all wrong

by lana   Jun 7, 2006

In my mind
i see you loving me in time
and you only being mine
it all turned to tears
all my worst fears
I'm my own place
i had to hide my face
all the bruises you gave
i wanted to be saved
it was all wrong
it went on for so long
you cut me real deep
and hit me so steep
all i did to my friends was lie
they always sore me cry
i wanted so much to die
all i wanted was so much
was your love and touch
but again i was so very wrong
and now it wont take me so long
to know whats right
from whats so very wrong


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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Wow-truly great read. i could feel your emotions shine through

    october xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh my god! So sad but yet a very good poem! Keep up the good work! 5/5 Thx for commenting on my poem!