Without you

by Fredy   Jun 7, 2006


Without you
I'm a flower with no petals,
rain with no clouds,
a rainbow with no colors.

without you,
I'm honey that is not sweet,
a book with no words,
a fish with no water.

that is what you would be to me:
my water if i was a fish,
my words if i was a book,
the sweet taste in my honey,
my colors if i was a rainbow,
my clouds if i was rain,
my petals if i was a flower

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mycquel

    This poem is very nice! It reminds me of the way I feel about the love of my life! Keep it Up!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥kazza♥

    Nice poem.. its sweet

  • 17 years ago

    by Steph

    Hi fredy, thank you for commenting on my poem, it really is appreciated. Well, when I read your poem I almost cried, because today my boyfriend broke up with me. And just like you, I feel so lost and alone with out him. Don't stop writting,
    Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by *_Clara_*

    Nice poem : )

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