Paint the Sky

by PygmyPuff   Jun 7, 2006


When the faerie castle crumbles,
The clouds drained of the clear illuminations.
The nomadic journey to a new kingdom,
Faced by those who escaped the arson.

The past highlighted by the sapphire hue amidst the white clouds,
Seen by all those you dare to view the suffering.
The battle well fought, but an everlasting loss.
Kingdoms if infinity gone in a moments time.

For when a faerie castle crumbles,
The clouds lose their pure white touch.
Fallen by the lack of faith in all things magickal,
By those whom believe this is only a story.

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Amazing poem! Its pieces like these that move me to the core sooo deeply. I love the way you used the olden terms of describing certain things like "faery" and "magickal" it gives such a unique strength. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    How true. We can lose our sense of adventure even in fantasy.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    This was a treat to read, I envy your talent :) The imagery is incredible.

  • 17 years ago

    by Russian Bridge

    I gave it a 3/5 cause i didnt see the point and understand it compltely. but the last line was good and gave you a sense of something (i just cant figure that out).there was some good vocabulary in the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Very good imagery. Your use of words created such a graphic pictures. Awesome stuff.

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