With you
by Evil love Jun 8, 2006
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When you hold me close |
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17 years ago
by Dimari
Been there. Very good. Have you ever seen the movie, Never-ending Story, which is for children, but boy, that is a movie full of things everyone should pay attention to. I was reading your profile and thought maybe, if you had not seen the original, you might like to:) Keep up the good work and remember, you can make it happen!
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17 years ago
by CoLliN
Wikkid poem Ma
keep it up
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17 years ago
by Natalie
That's sweet. I liked this poem the most! I love it when you're with someone and they can make everything feel so good. You did a good job on this poem, Really well done. Keep up the great work!! 5/5
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17 years ago
by Mousie
This was good... very cute... somewhat general though... try to use bigger words or more comparisons and symbols to create a more dramatic image... someone told me this for my poems, and they seemed to get better... it improved my writing... keep up the good work!
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17 years ago
by Mousie
This was good... very cute... somewhat general though... try to use bigger words or more comparisons and symbols to create a more dramatic image... someone told me this for my poems, and they seemed to get better... it improved my writing... keep up the good work!
