Wow I really loved this! It's such a unique and different approach to a love poem. I know that the idea of chivalry portrays it so nicely, and the ending is perfect. Keep it up! 5/5

*Watery eyes* that is a strong poem. how can I critisize this, do you have a poem I can critisize, the only thing I can critisize about this poem is the negativity in the beginning of it, another wonderful poem.. it flowed well and it also had a good message

I like this.. It's kind of the wrong way round to me, as I found your words to be what i want to say, but I want to say it from a womans perspective.. lol.. It's fantastic and honest, open and full of pain.. sometimes, the person you want can't see what's right there.. can't see WHO is right there, waiting to love them.. Definitely worthy of the 5/5. Well done. xx

Wow! Just amazing! This one is so impressive!

Awwwwwww.. that was soo sweett! i loved it, the rythym was great and so were the brilliant descriptions you used.. my favourite was the last stanza, there was so much power and emotion embedded in it and i really enjoyed reading it! truly great poem! 5/5

That was beautiful. I really like this one. Great job. 5/5

I do not understand how unbelievable poems become voted down while poetry barely being called decent are rated high. our use of imagery, even though it feels as though it's written subtle, is strong enough to paint a picture before a reader's eyes. Your vocab and way of writing about things and a subject I've yet to read before, is fascinating. A lot of emotion and way of seeing things. Well flowing poem.

Another very romantic piece with a touch of seemingly sincere sentiment

Wow... that's all i can say is wow... that was great... and it was so romantic and just beautiful! you're a wonderful writer... that is just beautiful

I really, really like how this is written. The whole idea behind it is something I wish more guys believed and told their significant others. Great job.

This is good, original, flowed beautiful and once again LOVED your descriptions! xxALLyxx

I'm not a knight in shining armor,
and I never said I would try;
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I liked those two lines the most. It was actually a pretty good poem, Why's it rated 3.9? Anyways, The flow was pretty good, And the rhyming seemed alright too. A pretty good peice all together! 5/5

`Taleee xx

That was a amazing poem and very dark in words.it describes a lot.keep up the good work.

Nice poem :) I like it

I loved that poem..it's one of my favorite that I've read...very beautiful. Keep up the good work :D
deffinately a 5

OMG! Sean, this is a literary triumph! You really hit one out of the park with this one.
I absolutely adore the last stanza, just wow!
I wish I could offer more than this senseless rambling, but it's all I've got...lol!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Awesome poem I like it :)

Good job with this poem
i really enjoyed reading it..

Wow
what a beautiful poem
i loved it
you made us feel what you were feeling
i loved it again what an wonderful poem

5/5

from lana