The "Cutting" Truth

by ღHazel_Kittenღ   Jun 10, 2006


As these sleeves have hid my cuts
So will I hide my emotions
For I know that above all else
They will only cause commotions

No one does care about the things
I'm feeling every day
And so my razor cuts me deep
Each and every way

Each line of mine a mark of sin
No single one will ever fade
For if they start to show that sign
I trace them so they're here to stay

All things reminded All penance paid
For I have no way to pay my sins
No longer do I remember innocence
Nor where it ends or begins

I only wish to be used
To others benefit
Whether that's to use me
Or beat me as it's write

I will continue "Marking Sins"
Until My body's scarred
And then I'll take my own life
That time isn't very far

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    Sorry, I don't know why it copied twice, my computer is freaking out. My bad.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    Wow. This poem was really good. Full of a lot of emotion. I just want you to know that there are people out there that care, and just be careful. If you ever need help, my shoulder is always here.

    Much love!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Disturbed Poet

    I understand the feelings in this poem.....to cut yourself as punishment or as a reminder of what you've done.....i know those feelings well

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. that was very good.. it contained so much emotion and the flow was great.. the only thing that i can point out is this ::

    All things reminded All penance paid
    ^ is "all" the second time meant to be capitalized?

    thats it, excellent write! 5/5!

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