Would you?

by Abbey aka the goth girl   Jun 10, 2006


**this douse not ryam**

if you saw a girl with cuts would you care? if you saw a girl with a bruise would you care? if i said that i cut would you care? if i said i want to DIE would you care?if i said i would slit my wrist tonight would you stop me? would you cry if i died? would you lie and say that you had no clue how this could happen? would say that if you could change that you where always there for me when you weren't would you? if i wort a note saying that you did this to me buy never being there and never believing me about the stuff your new husband did to me? would you care if i died and decided to not leave a note? because i am dead to you now and aways be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by kenzie

    I love this poem. its like my life. its so sad but i know how it feels. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey this is so sad! i really like the theme of this and the way its written.
    well done!
    love mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    This is a gweat poem. it doesnt have to rhyme, the flow of it was all good. its related to your first poem too isnt it? please be strong and do your best to keep ur head up high. keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    It doesn't have to rhyme to be a good poem. i liked it
    you spelled a couple words wrong, im not sure if you meant to do that or if it was an accident but i just wanted to clarify that with/for you.
    keep writing
    ~HazE

  • 17 years ago

    by jaimie

    Hey girl i no how u feel just read my poems u will see

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