I love you my sweet..
by -Immortal.Soul- Jun 12, 2006
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Petal by petal falls off the aged rose..Like the tears that fall from my open eyes..The smell of a rose, so sweet and soft..I remember your words, so strong yet full of love..A rose falls apart as days go by..Ive become smaller since that day you died.. You left me standing alone in this world..Like a single rose given to show love..I know your around, i still hear your voice but the rose is gone..But never the love.. |
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17 years ago
That was really good....
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17 years ago
Aw, this sounds really sad, hope ur okaye if this is true, i couldnt bare to loose a love :'(... anyways ur a really great poet =] k
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17 years ago
Excellent poem. Reminds me of words from Shakesphere
''What is a rose, by anyother name, that would smell just as sweet''
It does not need much tweeking or ways to make it better.
Beautiful write.
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