This is a good poem! Keep up the awsome work! Thanx for commenting on my poem! It means a lot! 5/5 hehe

Hey, good job, but i would think about your word choice cause some of it takes away from the feel.keep writing.

Thanx... I like ur poems too... 5.5!!!

Wow! great write alot of emotion in this poem well thanks for the comment i just thought i would return the favour!!!

I Understand What Your Talking About =[[
Thankyou For The Comment, It Means Alot

Aww..thats so sad.. it had a pretty good flow, the descriptions i felt though could have been improved, and the rhymes were a bit predictalbe.. so if you work on describing things more and maybe using better language, as well as making your rhymes more exciting, then this will be excellent!

that I will never
be happy
life for me is crappy
^ here, i don't think you should use "crappy" it kind of threw me off a bit.

great write though! 4/5

I can soo relate to all ur feelings in this poem i really like your work... and if u ever need to talk email me hi_babie@hotmail.com
take care
xoxo
robyn

I loved your poem, but you might want to choose you words a bit more carefully.... overall though it was a good poem. And thankx for commenting on my poem! =]

Very emotional poem. I really liked it. Good work.

This one flows so well. I like it alot :)

Hey this is another great, meaningful poem, i really liked it and all your quotes, keep up the good writing. and thanks for rating and commenting on my poem,

take care
=)

WOW, this is aweosme, keep it up...x x x

Hey thanx for commenting on my poems i absolutley love you style of writing its interesting to read and tells a story you awsome as keep it up....5/5
x x xmonique x x x

Hey and thankyou for your comment on my poem very much apreciated hunni...And this is an amazing poem I like it alot so you get a 5* from me, keep up the good work. Keep smiling.

Ayesha -x-

Great poem-liked the flow of it-keeps the reader interested 5/5

Thanks for the comment =) this is a great poem i understand how you feel

To the ever talented Angie

First of all: sorry for atking my time to getting back to you

Second of all: this is really good! nice symmetry of the words and the picture it creats.

Third of all: your on my favourites now :D

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

Hey thank u for ur comment....and i know whatever ur going throughm msut be tuff...but please no that taking ur life so readliy...it...well...there is so much to miss in life...falling in love....having a family....friends....i mean....my personaly belief...is that no one can truly determine if life is worth living or not untill after they have lived one...which means i guess...jus twait ...im sure things will get better...cuz they did for me

Hey thank u for ur comment....and i know whatever ur going throughm msut be tuff...but please no that taking ur life so readliy...it...well...there is so much to miss in life...falling in love....having a family....friends....i mean....my personaly belief...is that no one can truly determine if life is worth living or not untill after they have lived one...which means i guess...jus twait ...im sure things will get better...cuz they did for me

Hey I like this poem alot!!!! I can relate to alot of these...Im going through a tough time right now...it sounds like you are too. You are gifted with writing!!! I read some of your other peoms and they are all really good!! keep on writing and thanks so much for your comments on my poems...they meant alot to me! Ive been going through stuff for a long time and it's been really hard...but im still here so just stay strong if your going through a tough time too and keep writing...it always helps me.
Thanks again for everything