Oh how sweet, my home was at Faith Street, why u have not stop by?
honestly it is a great poem
deep.......................

Dude, did u went out of gas?
loooooooooooool

WOW, this is amazing!

Thanks for the comment on my poem!

Keep up the great work

~Miss Poetic~ x

Babe get on with you're bad ass poems!!!!! you have some great poems keep up the good work!!!!!!!!! You make my spirit rise with you're poems! incredible, girls that don't like you they really don't know what there missing.

Owch, that poem makes my heart feel like it was stabbed.
Keep it up and I hope you find your way back to Friendship Lane.

Great poem! You put a lot of emotion into it.

"I thought you will be desperate to
See me again"
^^I think you meant "I thought you would be desperate to see me again"

Other than that good job!

That was a really great poem!
You have a lot of talent, I felt a very strong emotional connection. Man, I wish I could find a guy like you, any girl would be crazy to do anything but be hopelessly devoted to you!
Great work!
Steph

It took me a little while before i could fingure out anythign to say about that poem. You made me spechless. Its a lovely poem, so close to home almost want to say its to close. Loved it

Really great poem, evokes alot of emotion. i've felt the same. 5/5.

This was pretty cool. I liked the whole street names thing. It was different. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I love this poem, its very unique how you used street names. this poem is great, thats all i can say. you have so much talent!
love maddy xoxox

Nice...... i like your work... this poem is very simple yet very nicely written...
keep up the good work....
5.5

Much Love,
Ipsita

If i knew of those secret words u used in ur poem then i would use the same kind of word to describe the beauty of your poem.. very touching.. and breath taking.......and the end very common.

D A M N!!!! thats really good

This is vary good keep up the good work!

This poem is soooooo MEEEE.....dude u are a great poet.

Very imaginative peice easy to understand

I like how you named the streets and the entire metaphor. its fantastic

Again detail..but a good poem

Lissa

Thats soo nice! loved the way you used the streets and all! yet it was very sad!

keep it up!

thanks for the comment on my poems