Cross your heart and hope for the best...very excellent piece of writting tho

Very good i love your words, you are a great poet and you should be proud : )
If you get time read and comment acouple of mine, take care.
Cheers

~**White Blizzard**~

I lked it THANKS

Aww it didn't suck! I liked it! The flow was pretty good, so was the rhyming. The emotion was strong in this one. Keep writting you have talent!

Cayce x

Aww it didn't suck! I liked it! The flow was pretty good, so was the rhyming. The emotion was strong in this one. Keep writting you have talent!

Cayce x

Oops! lol didn't mean to double post! Sorry!