Crimson Rain

by Deathcanwait   Jun 16, 2006


Because of you i never had days
Neither nights just murky greys
You caused not darkness yet not light
It's not ok; it's not alright
Because of you i slice my vein
Which trickles down like crimson rain
No one knows quite how i feel
This latest cut will never heal
Because of you i sit alone
A sleepless dog and im the bone
Never loved; a throbbing cyst
Burning where you never kissed
Because of you my insides died
Just longing for sweet suicide
Because of you this rusty knife
Will be like you and end my life.

M.H.

03/05/2006

Copyright © 2006 M.H.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    Wow... Amazing flow of words... I rarely read love poems but this poem really captivate me... Greatly expresed emotions and nicely written description...

    Great work! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    The imagry in this poem are great. And the poem itself is so desperate and sad. You did an amazing job.
    Hey, I actually have a poem called "bleeding crimson rain". You might like it.
    Anyways, great job! And keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. it tells me how you feel i like it alot.. nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    OH MEE GEE!!!!!!! u have this talent w/ ur words, that just blows me away!!!!!!! u have such a talent!!! 5/5!! wow...i feel ur rain just bleeding through ur words as the blood would through a vain! i feel ur pain and i am so sry! just stay strong babe!!! stay strong

    jenie

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