My Angel Razorblade kiss

by Drugs && Hugs   Jun 18, 2006


I'm tired and I'm cold
I don't want to think about next week
All I see is the pain it could hold
The future is so bleak

Nothing brings a smile anymore
To this angel girls face
Not like it did when I was only four
But now its this hell place

Things have changed in many ways
But for a girl as perfect as I must be
Its seems all she can think about as she lays
But no one can she the inside of me

Yes I admit i love my knife
I cant seem to stop any of this
this is what i have made of my life
one last razor blade kiss

~~I know it sucks.. first poem in about 5 months.. and I'm tired.. but yeah~~

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  • 14 years ago

    by AnCi

    Amazing! This is a big improvement from you suicide poem. The structure of the poem is great and the ryhmes are excellent. Keep writing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    The first stanza and last were definitely better than the middle two. Definitely liked them a lot more.

    I'm tired and I'm cold
    I don't want to think about next week
    All I see is the pain it could hold
    The future is so bleak

    ^^ the start is very strong...and hopeless..and reallly relatable. so great job on that.

    and like i said, the ending is good too. great job. ^.^

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