My crimson escape

by ~*im_the_best_at_ruining _my_life*~   Jun 18, 2006


I were these crimson bracelet\\\\\\\'s upon my wrists
the braclets never seen,hidden behind clinched fists
please make this go away
my worlds never been in such dismay
i can remember past mistakes
deeper and deeper, the pain i can take
tears are unbearable,i need an escape
you can see my bracelets covered in tape
i hate my face
the bloody water resembles lace
echoes of screams rewind
faces of hate wont leave my mind
i keep trying to sleep
such an impossible task while i weep
i close my eyes,to try to forget
someone will save me,yea i bet
the crimson bracelets upon my sleeve
don\\\\\\\'t u ever wonder? will the notice if u leave?.....

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I were these crimson bracelet\\\'s upon my wrists

    [I loved this line so much, but it should be {wear not were}]

    Now, I really loved this but I'm going to give you a suggestion that might help your ratings - Use punctuation.. It'll help the flow of the poem so much better.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem. its so deep and sad.. but i can relate to it sorta.. ur very talented. keep writing.. keep ur head up and stay strong.. this was a great poem.. 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Great poem-really deep 5/5

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