by LadyWaszky Jun 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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Our hearts are plagued with sadness, |
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The world seemed to stop turning |
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Great piece with some fantastic language usage and some good descriptions. The content is very clear and well conveyed |
by Sean Allen
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Very nice descriptive language, metaphors, similes and all that. The poem was specific and detailed, and of course very emotion-filled. Excellent write. |
by Turtle
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COOLIO |