Begging Silently

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 20, 2006


The shine of your hair against the sun
The glow of your eyes in the sea
The beauty of you face in the sky
The sound of your voice with the wind

I can't wait any longer for you to be mine
I'm sitting here waiting for your touch
I silently watch you laugh while I'm amazed
Will I waste time on what can never be?

I'll wait a little longer, because you're something special
I hope you've noticed how I stare at you with that look in my eye
The stare you give back to me I only hope means the same
After my own good, eyes closed, please see me begging silently

One more deeper look in your eyes
One more swallow of your laughter
Please baby give me one kiss, one look
I'll show you something that you've always wanted...

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  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Cute.
    I like how it you describe her beauty in the first stanza.
    Made me giggle.

    Hmmm I do think though that you could work on the flow a little.
    Just to help it be read easier.
    Doesn't have to have rhythm just play around with it and fix the structure.
    It could improve the tone and flow. :]