Drowning

by Jordanna   Jun 20, 2006


I'm drowning in the rain falling, I'm drowning in my pain, I'm drowning in the pain and sorrows not weakening but getting stronger and killing me more and more.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Y0URMY0NLYH0PE

    W0w thats really g00d!! keep writing! thanks f0r the c0mment!! i'll always return in fav0r!
    l0ve always
    aLi

  • 17 years ago

    by WakeboardxChick

    Your only twelve. wow. that takes of knowledge to right a poem that deep, well then again i'm only 13.i liked it~ 5/5, i like your style of writing, keep writing, would you please check out my poems. Luv ya's
    ~janean~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jordanna

    Thanks im only 12 and i love writing poems and i love to hear my poems r good

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Very good

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