Apple Shampoo (A Nonet)

by Sean Allen   Jun 21, 2006


Evaporates with the morning dew,
but the scent stays with my pillow--
like it was as good as new--
it smells of your sweet sweat
and apple shampoo;
these thoughts belong
to the realm
of the
night.

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  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . .
    lol liked this poem, it was a kind of random title but you did a good job on it i liked the angle you took, great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Tyler

    I like this one the most today out of the billions i've read. GREAT JOB!

  • 17 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Wow! I loved this poem. It was short and cute. It had meaning. I loved the part about the apple shampoo, it was so random, but it added so much to the poem and made the poem stand out amongst all other love poems. I really really liked it :)! GREAT poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey, I loved it sweet and short...I think I know you?

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Umm..I can almost smell that scent, great job