UNTITLED!!!

by shay   Jun 22, 2006


You left me standing
by the lake,
alone and cold i was,

Until your hand,
had touched,
my back
a feeling of
love and peace,

a feeling of sensation,
lay upon my heart,
for the hand of god,
lay on my shoulder,
As a charm of good luck.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Nice short but complex sweet hehe

  • 17 years ago

    by girl

    Omg! ***TEAR*** u know i couldn't write a non rhyming poem lyk that if it killed me! you are truely talented if you ever publish a book i will be the 1 one to buy it!!!!!! much love!
    tara~~screename~~tenten

  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Oh Wow. Most Lovely poem.

    I really liked:

    a feeling of sensation,
    lay upon my heart,
    for the hand of god,
    lay on my shoulder,
    As a charm of good luck.

    Very nice! 5/5
    You should try and make it a bit longer though. =]

    xx.N-G-C-S.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, great. 5/5

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