Ocean Breeze

by Italian Stallion   Jun 23, 2006


Sitting here by the ocean's breeze
I think of you
And all the times we had
When we where engaged

Kissing each other
And enjoying the view
That had made us cuddle
And feel so free

Out there on the sea
With you by my side
Sailing through the wind
Feeling the ocean's breeze

Asking you to marry me
And be my bride
Oh how you brought a smile to my face
When you said, "Yes, I will"

My life has changed
Ever since I met you
I am whole with you by my side
And I want you to know, "I Love You"

With you as my wife
I enjoy the view
Out here on the beach
Feeling the ocean's breeze

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie

    My life has changed
    Ever since I meet you
    [I think you were meant to say "ever since I met you"]
    ------------------------------------------
    I am whole with you by my side
    I enjoy this view

    With you as my wife
    I enjoy this view
    [You said the same line twice and to me it threw it off a little, mainly cause they're so close together.]
    ------------------------------------------
    And all the times we had
    That we agreed
    [Agreed on what? Marriage? I was a little confused with that.]

    ..It was a pretty good poem, Thought it was sweet. =)

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 19 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Really really sweet i love it
    God bless u
    Good luck!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Raychel

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jello, i love it!! 5/5!! keep it up buddy boy!!

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