Aw babe! this is so very sad =(
why to do so???? even thou your poem holds some true and special meanings about these girls who try to be fit and thin and make themselves look good!

I guess some girls might kill themselves for such things!
So I hope your poem was just an imaginary idea, not a true story because you already have a beautiful personality inside =)

keep it up hun
Great job on this piece of work
Best Of Luck!
NemO x0x0x0x0x

I love this poem, it described ana in a different way from what I'm used to read. It described many details about anorexia.
It really made me feel sad about this eating disorder, it's not easy to get out of it and you made it clear in your poem.

I hope that you're doing well.

XoXo
Gaby

Awww no baby, not anorexia. Ohhh hunni, my heart cries for you. Anorexia chains you and enslaves you so so so much. It is such a horrible trap that won't bring you what you want. You want so badly to be skinny so people will think you look pretty, but Ana will take away people in general. She will destroy you! Oh baby, no no no no, don't go there. I was trapped by Ana and I fight everyday now to stay free, winning and loosing all the time. Awww hun. I hope this is not you, and if it is, please deal with it before it destroys you, okay? For me? Please lovely? *tear* You are too wonderful of a person with too much talent to be taken in my her lies. *Hugs*

-Tainted

Oo sweet angel!! baby doll!! no no no!!! u r all these things! ur beautifily and perfectly thin!! ur perfect! not just in my eyes but in EVERYONES eyes!! sis...pick up food! eat it! love it! taste it! and dont regret it!! o baby doll...im so sry for Ana!! shes a b**ch!!! dont let urself be hers!!!!! baby doll....u r perfect!!! please trsut me!!!!!!

i love u so much!
amazing poem

ur sis

Omg i love this poem and i think you are just fine the way you are! start eating girl! its okay to eat. i love your poems and you are amazing! love you! -hayley

Oh hunni =[ im so sorry you're struggling with this, i was ana a few years ago and its horrible a really horrible cycle you get into, i really feel for you with this. it was a beautiful poem, flowed perfectly and so much emotion in it, im here if you ever need me i really am, you dont deserve this pain xxxxx

Wow this is sad hun but its also brilliant! xxx

This was very sad. And I hope this isn't about you. If it is and you ever need someone to talk to. Just drop me a private message alright?

This poem was written beautifuly. There's not a thing I would change, Keep it up and smile =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Awww hunni. My heart goes out to you. Ana is a cruel friend and not one I would ever want for you. Anorexia will rob you of everything you have and still will never bring you the skinny body you crave because you will never be satsified with it. As one speaking from a bit of experience, it is not the road that will lead you anywhere except at a hospital or six feet under. I love you bunches and wouldn't want that for you at all. Hugs!

-Tainted

I love it..
i use to be ana/mis..
n gettin back to it..
you did a great job..
stay stong lil mamma

Beautiful and wonderful poem. Excellent job in describing yourself and situation, it was very unique and a great pleasure to read. However, my side advice is kicking in and I really wish hun that you would hear me out on one thing. I had a friend who died from anorexia. A dear, dear friend. She was the light in everyone's hearts...lied about eating, starved herself every day, until her body failed her. She had collapsed outside, walking alone, and slipped into a coma that never went into remission. She was found on a deserted street possibly two hours later, her body cold without life. When I think of her I wish I could change anyone's hearts which move towards anorexia or bulemia. It kills my soul really, I wish I could be of a help but no one ever takes my advice anyway, as you can see. Take care, and be well.

Great poem. I dislike how people starve themselfs to look like sticks. Keep it up

No hun, don't let Ana beat you. Luv ya & don't want you to get ill. I care so much :)

This is really sad, yet really well written. You did a good job expressing emotion and pain and the flow is flawless. Amazing write! Definately a 5/5. Stay Strong---

Sabrina --
Ahh, I see that`s your name. What a lovely name ;; that`s what my parents were going to name me! But I got stuck with Samantha Hollywood, not so bad, I guess. But, back to the poem --
This was definitely an improvement frm your last poem I read. I really liked this one a lot ;; you did a great job! The flow and the rhyming didn`t seem too forced, which is good. Keep this up, wonderful job. 5/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood