Why are you sad?

by Allison   Jun 27, 2006


Its kills me to see you hurt
And I die everytime you cry
You're always so sad
and I want to know why

Did someone hurt you?
or are you short on luck?
Whatever it is
ill help you cheer up

You are so perfect in my eyes
So many people love you
I dont know why you feel lonely
and always so blue

Ill do anything i can
to make it all better
cuz i dont want to see
your cheeks get any wetter

Its kills me to see u hurt
and i die everytime you cry
but ill always love you
ill be by u for the rest of my life

**** The rhyming makes it really cheesy. so sry about that. but i was up thinking about someone at like 2 and decided to write this

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  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Great poem! You expressed well how you feel when someone you care about it hurting and you dont know why---Lots of emotion! It flows nicely and I like the rhyme in it. I dont think that it is cheesy because it didnt feel forced,,,which is good! The only thing that broke up the flow for me is at the end when you put ''you'' as ''u''. I just wasnt expecting it because the rest of the poem had ''you'' spelled out. Besides that it is perfect. Great write---5/5---

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