My river

by jackie   Jun 27, 2006


Theres a blue river
coming from my eyes.
theres a red river
coming from my wrists.

each one shows the pain
that i hold inside.
each one a symbol
of what i can no longer hide.

there each a river
a river of emotion.
which is my river.
which leads to my ocean?

my ocean of life.
my ocean of death.
my ocean of feeling
is all i have left.

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  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I like it.. its very good. it has alot of emotion in it.. ur talented keep writing 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 work. i liked this a lot. nice use of wording and descritpions. 5/5