Lonely

by JAMIE   Jun 27, 2006


You are probably at that camp
Having so much fun
Without a single second
Spent thinking about me
Not one thought of regret
Of you leaving me

All I have is regret
Regret of the choices I made
Regret that I broke my promise

And I know, I know, I know
I shouldn't beat myself up
But you knew this was going to happen
That I would lose all self-confidence
I'm sorry I just can't help it
Because this is all my fault
I chose to continue my habit
And now I have to lose us
I'm so lonely without you

I had very little self-confidence
Before we had started dating
But when I heard you say
That you liked me and everything
It gave me a little more confidence
And when you broke up with me
I still had a little hope
Then I found out the truth
That you don't want me back
And I have no self-confidence
No self-worth, no more hope

Now all I have ahead of me is poetry
And another long, restless night

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very say poem. And you expressed your emotions really well in this! I liked it alot!

    And I know, I know, I know
    I shouldn't beat myself up
    [I loved those lines. Repeating, "I know, I know, I know" really brought more power to the poem.]
    This was great! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I know what you mean, I have little self-confidence myself. I liked your poem, it's so well written, and it's clear. The third stanza was my favorite.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Great poem
    really sad ='[
    i hope things get better and stay strong
    you are an amazing writer with a huge ammount of talent!
    greatwork keep it up
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Omg...the strangest thing....every single word of this poem describes exactly my current situation! Great poem!

    xoxoxo Haley