Life is a burning candle

by cassie   Jun 29, 2006


Life is a burning candle
Giving all your strength to keep the light going
Shielding yourself from all harmful elements
Not letting your light burn out

Life is a burning candle
When your lights burning low
You find yourself back on your feet in no time
Your candle is burning bright again

Life is a burning candle
When your light is out you know
You have given it your all to keep that light going
It was time for your candle to go, because the wick is gone

Life is a burning candle that eventually ends

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  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good. You are right "Life is a burning candle that eventually ends" i like how you put that everything has to end in a creative way! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Cassie --
    Overall, I think this poem was good. But you asked what you should work on ;; so I`m telling you.
    The theme of this poem was incredibly vague ;; not until the last line did I know what you were talking about. I would add more detail and imagery.
    But other than that, good job. 4/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by {Miss} [A][L][L][I][S][O][N]

    Holy Moly Cassie! I honestly truly didn't think you could write like this...this is a really good one and Idon't really think this one needs any work. Great even though it reminds me of Brent and makes me sad *sniff sniff* but anyways I ecsp. like the end.

  • 17 years ago

    by cassie

    Can u please rate mine and tell me what I need to work on, so I can improve on my poems?

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