HATE

by Damian   Jun 30, 2006


Hate is all i feel
Hate is what ive become
Hate is overwhelming
Something has to be done.

i feel the need to kill
i feel the need to inflect pain
sombody with a good life
their blood i will drain

Cut them from their neck
Cut them from their throut
cut them so many times
they feel no need to choke

they will die in the moonlight
they will die in my arms
I will just stare and laugh
till their life was gone

im watching his family cry
im watching his parents mourn
im watching his friends weep

im feeling kinda bad
im feeling a little strange
i dont like this feeling at all
only one thing will get rid of this pain

pull out the gun
cock it slowly
put it in my mouth
close my eyes

then only will my problems be gone
then will i finaly be happy
re live my childhood memories
pull the trigger just like my cousin ben

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxMizz DistructionxX

    It was very deep.!
    i could feel the anger.
    good job
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Very deep poem
    loved it
    5/5

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 19 years ago

    by Natashia

    Nice poem....it's deep and I can tell it came from the heart

  • 19 years ago

    by kendra

    I think this is a really good poem aznd I think that it could use a little improvement but I REALLY REALLY REALLY like it!

    p.s. you need to get a picture of you on your profile.....hehe.

  • 19 years ago

    by codey

    I really enjoyed reading this;
    so full of emotion
    and you can tell this either really happened to you (not you dying obviously but someone close) or that you were just in that state of mind
    keep it up
    5/5